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Xhaos
 Jun 29, 05 - 1:23 AM |
Chaos: Prelude (ish. 0- ish. 3 (diff. reality))
**This is my storyline for my own comic books, i already have a few issues inked, but i need to learn how to use dreamweaver in order to publish them on my webpage... but for now enjoy the story!-total ** -Chaos: Prelude- "God, why... why do i have to wake up?" Chaos thought to himself. "Waking up anymore hurts... brings me to this world that is not mine. To a world that I don't belong in..." It had been months already since the first time Chaos woke up to this new world. Upon his arrival he found numerous changes that simply did not belong. The world was in chaos, at war with itself. The continent of North America was no longer controlled by the U.S... but by Omega Corp. which was also being controlled by his father... and Chaos himself. Chaos sat up. "I must find a way to end this maddness and return to my reality," he thought to himself. He sighed, knowing it would not be an easy task... even though he had been going through training since he openly opposed his father and their reign. Since then he had been welcomed by a mix of open and closed arms. Some people started welcoming him as their savior... a means to free them from Omega Corp... others feared him, they feared that he was only using this as a guise, to get their hopes up then pull the rug out from underthem, causing them to lose all hope. The only source of light in the room was from the cigarette that he had just lit... he hadn't noticed the other figure sitting quietly just in the corner. Multi-coloured eyes stared at him. "Today is the day...do you feel ready?" Total was emotionless... but he was quietly hoping that Chaos wouldn't be up to the task. "You are to make your first true assault at Omega Corps citidal-your "father's" stronghold." Chaos blew out a stream of smoke. "Didn't hear you... I'm ready..." "as ready as i'll ever be" he thought to himself, "this is suicide... but if i don't make the first move then i'm a sitting duck... he'll have jump troops all over the place hunting me down." Chaos crushed the cigarette in his hands, ignoring the burn he was getting. "Ready to get this over with?" Total's eyes flashed indigo, then violet. "..." They both stood and nodded, they no longer needed this idle chit-chat, they knew the task at hand. Chaos strapped his boots on and headed out the door. He looked up at the moon, it was full... and it would be down in only a few hours. He looked back at Total, "Wish me luck, I'll see you when I get back." Total just nodded and Chaos flew into the night sky... Total blinked, "You'll see me much sooner..." He sighed at the job he had to do... "This is going to be harder for me then you boy..." With that, Total stepped backwords into the shadows... and dissappeared. < < Chaos flew silently in the cold night air. He looked around what used to be Washington DC... what used to be it... After the war for control the Omega forces were ordered to destroy everything that opposed the new reign. So they did, buildings were in ruins, monuments destroyed... the White House... the White House was now part of the Citidal. Chaos looked at the horizon. The Citidal was huge, bigger then he remembered. He continued flying... From below, pale eyes followed Chaos's every movement... Chaos followed the outer wall of the Citidal's perimeter... following the guard posts full of Omega troops waiting for an oncoming attack... if anywas was that foolish. He looked ahead, hoping he'd find the area he was hoping for... he did. It was a part of the outer wall that was unguarded, it had been destroyed by previous attempts to overthrow Omega Corp earlier... but they never bothered to repair it... they didn't fear that they'd be attacked again. They didn't have to. Chaos landed and started for the opening. He felt a chill run down his spine... someone was there. He slowly turned... Total stood stolid. His sword sheathed in it's holder. Total was a fairly tall creature, about 6' 3", long grey hair that was accented by one green and one purple (sometimes red) strand of hair on opposites sides of his head. He was a 2nd generation bloodwynd vampire... he wore old samurai armour that he had remade into something more... fashionable for him. it allowed full movement and so much more. Chaos swallowed hard, "Wha-what are you doing here Total? I thought you weren't going to-" "Shut up... the last thing i need right now is you giving me a guilt trip for what i'm about to do." Total's eyes flashed red. He didn't want to do this but he had to.. it's what he was hired to do... "Prepare yourself boy!!!!" Total yelled and got into a full fledge dash at Chaos, unseathing his sword at the same time. Chaos had no time to react. < |
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Xhaos
Jun 29th, 2005 - 1:27 AM |
Re: Chaos: Prelude (ish. 0- ish. 3 (diff. reality))
- Chaos: Issue 2. Chaos Vs. Total - Total dashed. Chaos had no time to react, he closed his eyes. He felt the wind comming off of Total as he neared, then felt the breeze of his sword coming down. Pause. Chaos opended his eyes, Total had stopped with barely an inch left between his sword and Chaos's neck. He gulped. Total shook his head in disbelief. "Didn't I teach you nothing boy?" Total couldn't believe it. What Chaos just going to give up that easily. He looked Chaos in the eye, "Defend yourself. Defend then attack." Total's eyes flashed blue... he dissappeared all of a sudden. Chaos closed his eyes... he had to figure out where Total would appear... where indeed... He looked straight above and smiled. Chaos's fists clenched into two tight balls and started glowing. He raised them and fired multiple shots above him... some exploded on contact with something or rather someone and others just missed. Chaos smiled and ran. Total was pleased, some of the training was beginning to show... he wondered if Chaos would go beyond his normal powers and use what it was only he could use... Total couldn't wait he thought as he wiped the blood off of his lips and flew after Chaos. Chaos ran and ran... he knew that he had only a few chances to try to defeat Total... one of those chances he didn't want to take... He shook his head and thought, I won't do that... I can't do that. He looked ahead. Total stood again. "****" he muttered. Total smiled, "Do it boy... you need to." He slide his hand across the flat of his sword. "I've been meaning to test what you can do across the shadow sabre... but you never would use that part of your powers..." Chaos shook his head, "You know I won't, it... it takes too much out of me." Total yelled, "That's bull and you know it. It doesn't take anything out of you, all it does is causes you brief pain... but it increases your power greatly... In order to get past me you will have to do it." Chaos paused... "I won't do it... not even if I'm almost dead I won't." God, he hoped he was right. Total shrugged, "Your funeral." He shot blast after blast of dark energy into Chaos, knocking him back foot after foot. Chaos knelt. Even without trying Total was still more powerful. He couldn't- no wouldn't fight back. Total appeared beside Chaos. He gave him a kick in the ribs that caused Chaos to jump up a few feet, then slammed him into the ground with a knock to the back. Chaos slowly got to his knees again. "Still want more boy?" Total grinned and thought "please... stand up to me, show me you can do this." He blurred and kneed Chaos in the face, causing Chaos to arc his back in pain. He grabbed him the neck and lifted him into the air. With eyes glowing red Total threw Chaos through a building effortlessly. He was there to "greet" Chaos on the otherside of it with another kick to the ribs. This time they cracked. Chaos spit blood. Chaos fell a few feet beyond Total. Chaos coughed up a puddle of blood. He looked at it, he had coughed up enough that he could see his reflection. He was beaten up pretty good... bloodied a little... but no worse for wear. He stood up and gritted his teeth. "You caused this Total" He growled. Chaos bunched up his fists again as every muscle, every joint, tensed up. Chaos began floating as ripples started appearing... pulsating away from Chaos. The ground started to break apart and rise around Chaos... big pieces breaking up into smaller one and then breaking into nothing... Chaos's long hair flew out in all directions and his eyes closed. Bony pertrusions started erupting from Chaos's elbows... with each passing second they grew and got longer... "AAAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!" Finally Chaos screamed as they reached their full length. Everything returned to how it was... and Chaos landed on his feet. He had a new look on his face. Determination. "Total, either you are with me, or against me. And you'd better hope that you are with me, or so help me God..." and with that Chaos flew at Total. cling, clack, cling, clack, clank. Total's sword and Chaos's pertrusions meet in a series of hits each time reverberating like it was metal against metal. Chaos had the upper hand, using the other pertrusion as a weapon against Total he managed in cutting the vampire in various places... They'd seperate and come together again fighting, sometimes on the ground, other times in the air... it was a dance that only the two of them knew the steps to. Finally they both landed... Chaos behind Total with his back to him. They were both panting... obviously tired. Chaos turned his head, "You done yet?" "Nope" "Darn..." They laughed in unison and went back at it again... this continued for over an hour... what they didn't know was that they were being watched the whole time... Omega cameras were all over the place... catching every movement, every attack, dodge, parry, etc. ((more to come- i reached limit)) |
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Xhaos
Jun 29th, 2005 - 1:29 AM |
Re: Chaos: Prelude (ish. 0- ish. 3 (diff. reality))
((Continuation of prev. post)) They came together again and a blur... energy bolts rippling off of the two of them, then an explosion... They hit the ground at the same time... Chaos and Total stood up... ready to fight again... CLANK!! Total couldn't believe it... his legendary shadow sabre had been cracked in half and split apart! Chaos had truely won this fight... Total bowed, "You have won... finish me or leave, it's up to you." Chaos lit a cig and walked up to Total and patted him the back. "Thanks for the workout..." And continued back to the Citidal. Total smiled, this had truely been ironic... he was sent to stop Chaos, but had secretly wished that Chaos would win... and won he had. Chaos walked past Total... shaking his head, "How in the world did I just beat him?" He thought to himself... He shrugged, "Something's up.. he wanted me to win... I could feel it..." He continued walking and looked around... the surroundings had changed a little... crap! During the fighting they musta moved back further away from the Citidel. "Grrrr..." Chaos growled as he flew into the night air. Total stood up and looked at his now broken sword. "Good... good... did you catch all of that?" He looked up at the dark figure that had been hiding and watching... The figure nodded... A stray moonbeam reflected off of it's metallic head, revealing that this creature was a either robotic or else wearing armour. Total started to walk away... Hopefully they wouldn't find out that he had half-assed the battle... There was no way that he'd let them know Chaos' full power... or his own for that matter... but he would give them a hint of it... after all... He got paid, that's all that mattered.. and his sword... heh.. his precious "shadow sabre" it wasn't broken at all... this was a replica that was created just for this purpose... he wouldn't risk losing his heirloom.. no way, no how... Total smirked as he walked away... Now for me to set up my hand in all of this... |
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